1) You have some good content and ideas down, as well as a simple style of writing that is easy to follow. However, I am seeing a lot of text here without any other variety. Why not include some videos and images to break things up and keep it interesting? Sometimes a good image can catch a person’s attention and get them to read the rest of the post.
2) I don’t know who you are. Your page lacks a short bio, a picture of you, or some other explanation of who the “face behind the blog” is. Your subject matter is about finding wealth, health, and happiness, but why should I trust you? I think that if you include more of your own personal experiences and trials throughout life, that you will be able to relate better to your readers. Try relating your posts to something that has happened to you personally.
3) You have a good theme for organization and navigation, but where is the personality? The colors are dark and although they are easy on the eyes, they are a bit boring. They also don’t really work together that well. What does this blog theme tell us about the person writing the posts?
4) I commend you for linking within your blog to older posts. Many bloggers forget to do this and it ends up that their old posts are neglected. The next challenge, however, is to network with other bloggers who cover similar topics and build relationships with them. By linking to other blogs within your posts, you can start relationships and collaborations between each other.
5) It is good that you have a “ShareThis” button up. However, some readers may not notice or know what it is. For your average visitor who is not tech-savvy, I recommend putting in at least an “email” button.

I hope this helps!
Chungyen Chang
Weather for Headphones

Ryan

” experience is the best teacher ”